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This was really clever, great way to use dialogue to slowly reveal the characters and story. Makes me think of a stageplay

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Thank you! These three characters may be popping up with regularity.

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"From Hollywood: The Lux Radio Theatre...."

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Pretty neat. There is a Twitter based horror narrative titled The Sun Vanished that uses a similar idea in a clever way.

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Mar 1Liked by Bradley Vee

Da na na na da da My Corona 🎵— jk, though I think Ill reread this with some Sun Ra on the t-table

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Haha!

I had a free jazz phase too!

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I was thinking this is like a solar "Waiting for Godot," but shorter.

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I can see that! I have a feeling the Three Dumbasses are not done.

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Woah this is cool.

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YOU'RE cool!

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Impressive and striking as always. Thanks Bradley.

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Thanks, Mike!

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