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William Pauley III's avatar

That may be the most insane, brilliant first sentence I've ever read. 👏

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A.P. Murphy's avatar

Superbly written, Bradley. If this is what it takes to get prose like that, I'm hoping for a million chatterboxes to descend on you without delay.

[edit - called you Bardley by typo, but now I'm thinking I like Bardley more?]

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Bradley Vee's avatar

I think Bardley is perfect for a guy complaining about speech.

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Jon T's avatar

Chat chat fly into my hat as we used to say in Bat School. This was phenomenal writing. And like Pauley said, that first sentence-sheeesh madam. Please tickle my brain ears some more, my fine bones are dancing like faeries in the tendergrass.

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c.d. mudge's avatar

Okay, so I'll mark you down as undecided then?

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Bradley Vee's avatar

Where hypocrisy and indecision meet, there I be. Lol.

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Isha Yiras Hashem's avatar

I would have enjoyed it more without the language. And without the certain knowledge that if you met me in real life, and indicated the tiniest bit of non - discouragement, I would happily talk your ear off about Nebuchadnezzar.

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