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Nonsense! But thanks!

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Damn the elegance of this prose. I need to redo everything I've done and try to make it read as beautifully as this.

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There’s something deeply intriguing about a world where we could strip away politicians and the police system as we know it, keeping only those who truly serve the community. Reading this story makes me wonder about the thin line between authority and illusion — how easy it is to get lost in the layers of power and control, much like Al-Din did with the mirror.

Al-Din’s story really drives home the idea that, often, it’s not the title of king, queen, or even “good” or “bad” that defines a person’s role but the actions and intentions behind them. The mage, labeled a criminal and a demon, ends up commanding more loyalty and truth from the queen than her husband ever could. This part hits hard because it’s something we see every day: titles and power don’t inherently deserve trust; actions do. Imagine if GnosisNet could bring that idea to life — a society without people in power “because they have to be there,” but instead, just those who actually want to protect and serve.

And maybe that’s the appeal of this tale for me: Al-Din’s ultimate downfall comes from his obsession with control, with trying to own the loyalty and actions of those around him rather than earning it. The idea of replacing politicians with something genuine — a GnosisNet where respect and service to the community are paramount — feels like a much-needed reminder that true authority doesn’t come from force or title. It’s earned, often quietly, by those who really care.

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